Tuesday, May 28, 2019

All about me



This is my all about me poster.  I'm 9 years old and These are all the thing me and my family like to do. When it is a hot day me and my family sometimes go to the beach and play vole. At home when it is night time my hopes and dream is to be a police. My favourite thing to do is play on my little brothers play station 4. Last but not lest my favourite hobbies is my baby sister. 

10 comments:

  1. Kia ora Lyeza! It has been lovely reading your poster about you. I like the fact these are all things you like to do with your family. That is wonderful. - Whāea Nicky

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  2. Hi Lyeza.
    I like how colorful your about me post is.
    I like to go to the beach with my family on the weekends too.
    Can I suggest you make your headings all one bold color so they stand out.
    How many brothers and sisters do you have? I have one older brother.
    From Kaitiaki.

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    1. Hi Kaitiaki thanks for the comment and I have four sisters and one brother one more thing do you have a sister?
      From Lyeza

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    2. No I only have my brother Wirihana, he is 16 and Im 10.

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  3. Hi Lyeza i am Charlee from New Brighton Catholic I liked your post because you said what you like and what you want to do when you are older. Maybe next time put the words of what you had to answer a wee bit bigger because i could not really see them. I also have playstation 4 and like helping people like my family.
    What games do you like playing on your playstation?
    Make sure to check out my blog.

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    1. Hi I'm Lyeza and what I like to play on my play station 4 is fifa.

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  4. Kia Ora, my name is Helen and I'm from Room 23 at Owairaka District School. I really liked your blog post about all about you. The thing that I really liked in your all about me was the way you put about what your top skill was. Thank you for sharing your learning. You should check out my blog.
    Blog you later,
    By Helen.

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  5. Hi Lyeza my name is Kate from New Brighton Catholic School. I liked the way you made your background a rainbow, it looks really pretty.The facts you have used are really good.Next time, you could maybe not add too much pictures because it sorta made eyes swim. Did you do this on Google Drawings?

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  6. Hello lyeza my name is sophia from new brighton catholic and I like how you did all about you slide it was awesome


    Did you think about putting your favorite emoji and food



    Maybe you could post some more stuff on your blog to get more people interested





    And did you enjoy it?


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  7. KIA Ora,My name is Maria and I'm in Room 23 at Owiaraka District School.I really like your blog post about Yourself.The think that I like about you is your baby sister.I wish I had a baby sister. You should check out my blog.Blog you later

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