I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Kia Ora Lyeza, this is Shannon from the Summer Learning Journey.
I really like your post about how to leave a good comment. You’ve done a marvellous job with your scratch remix and I especially like the different colours you’ve used in your flow diagram. They brighten up your blog wonderfully and make the guide very easy to follow.
The little cat is very cute! He reminds me of my own cat but whereas Scratchy is ginger, my cat is black and white and super fluffy! His name is Hoshi and we’ve taught him how to shake hands. Do you have any pets?
It would be awesome if you could make the background a little bit brighter. The sky is a wonderful blue so perhaps you could make the bottom half greener so that it matches.
In case you hadn’t realised, I used your guide to construct this comment! You have done an utterly brilliant job and summarised everything you need to be an upstanding digital citizen incredibly well.
Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments. Positive - something I have done well. Thoughtful - a sentence or more that lets me know you that you read/watched or listened to what I had to say.
Kia Ora Lyeza, this is Shannon from the Summer Learning Journey.
ReplyDeleteI really like your post about how to leave a good comment. You’ve done a marvellous job with your scratch remix and I especially like the different colours you’ve used in your flow diagram. They brighten up your blog wonderfully and make the guide very easy to follow.
The little cat is very cute! He reminds me of my own cat but whereas Scratchy is ginger, my cat is black and white and super fluffy! His name is Hoshi and we’ve taught him how to shake hands. Do you have any pets?
It would be awesome if you could make the background a little bit brighter. The sky is a wonderful blue so perhaps you could make the bottom half greener so that it matches.
In case you hadn’t realised, I used your guide to construct this comment! You have done an utterly brilliant job and summarised everything you need to be an upstanding digital citizen incredibly well.
Hei konā mai,
Shannon